Thursday, April 9, 2009

Writing challenge-day 2

I'm really into poetry right now...thank you Katherine Bomer. Here's my poem I wrote for today...gentlemen, pay attention!

Simplicity

How do I look?
She asks with a hopeful heart

Don't tell her she looks marvelous
As if to mock her

Don't tell her she looks attractive
For it is too close to unattractive

Don't tell her she's cute
She is not a child

Don't tell her she's pretty
It's far too common

The next time she looks at you
And bears the question
Just look at her
Smile
Simply lovely tell her

She may smile and walk away
But the words will linger
In her mind
Forever

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like it!

Nick and Jill Juday said...

I love this KK! What do you think about me doing an art challenge everyday? :) Maybe I will take another turn at shoes??!!

Miss you! :)

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